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June News: A Garden, Dwarves, and a Summer Book Fair

So you know how I’m writing a mystery series where the PI walks around clocking soul gardens around people, ones where greenery shifts and creatures pop in and out with the owner’s mood? Well, when you spend hours and hours doing that, dreaming up what emotions and feelings might look like in green, you start to notice gardens in real life.

More than you did before. Much more.

Look, that tree has an odd trunk. What a peculiar flower. Weird hole in the ground, I wonder if someone—or something—lives in it.

Earlier this month, I found myself in a garden. We’d traveled to Europe to visit family, just in time for the first of the London heat waves. The temperatures were milder during the second part of the trip, the Austria one. It was late afternoon and I had gone out to explore Salzburg’s Mirabell Gardens. The garden is famous for, among other things, being one of the filming locations for the movie The Sound of Music.

Mirabell Gardens, looking in the direction of Hohensalzburg Fortress on a cloudy day.
Mirabell Gardens, looking in the direction of Hohensalzburg Fortress.

I’ve always liked formal gardens, maybe because I possess a minimalist green thumb. (We have exactly six small plants in the kitchen that somehow miraculously hang on and what’s in the yard is hardy enough to survive without much attention.)

So there I was, enjoying the neat paths, perfectly-planted rows of flowers, and the view of Hohensalzburg Fortress on its hill overlooking the town. The rain that had threatened to fall had changed its mind and I had my umbrella tucked under my arm. I climbed a set of stairs to see what the upper level of the garden looked like, only to encounter a pair of odd statues at the top of the steps. They seemed engaged in some kind of battle/sport/game. Here is the one on the left as you walk across the short bridge:

Stone statue of a dwarf with a spiked sleeve and a ball in the other hand.
Dwarf with Spiked Sleeve

Past the bridge stood a whole circle of statues.

I had stumbled onto the delightful Dwarf Garden (Zwergelgarten).

A circle of stone statues.
The Dwarf Garden.

To my modern eye, the figures looked like they just stepped out of a fantasy novel or folk tale. Did it feel a bit like I’d walked into a movie set for the Soul Garden series? Just a bit. There are no dwarves in Rod Gray’s catalogue of feelings—though there are gargoyles (looking on with disapproval) and the Gnome of Envy & JealousyThe gnome is rosy-cheeked and likes to hover, winking, just out of reach. It would have fit right in.

Dwarf with Spade

Later I looked it up and learned that the “oldest dwarf garden in Europe” was created in 1715, originally held 28 marble statues (now down to 17), and that the game played by the pair of dwarves guarding the bridge was called pallone (it’s where the English word balloon comes from.) Also, the sculptures may have been based on real people. If that’s the case, their names have been lost to time. What’s left is a curious bit of history—and a reminder that you never know what you might encounter in a garden, be it real or fictional.

Inbound Book Fair

Save the Date! If you’re in the Twin Cities, I’ll be at the Inbound Book Fair on Saturday, July 11, from 11 am to 7 pm. The event takes place at the Minnesota State Fair Grandstand and is shaping up to be a fun one. The organizers, Inbound BrewCo, describe the philosophy behind the event this way:

Remember the thrill of a Scholastic Book Fair as a kid? We’re bringing that nostalgia back, but for grown-ups!

Come and meet local authors, bookish crafters, peruse wares from indie bookstores, all while sipping craft drinks. There’ll also be a silent auction for the Loft Literary Center (I contributed an auction item, a 50 Page Manuscript Critique; hopefully it will bring in a bid or two.)

You can buy tickets here. (There’s a coupon! Use the discount code NEVE20 to receive 50% off any ticket type for up to 10 total tickets. Limit of 4 per order. Code is valid through July 4th. Children 12 and under get in for free.)

You’ll find me with my books and signing pen at Table 20, in the vicinity of one of the entrances and the Loft Literary auction. Hope to see you there!

What I’m Reading

I’ve been enjoying Peggy Townsend’s The Botanist’s Assistant. A suspicious death in a science lab, with an eccentric and likable botanical expert on the case. Next up on my TBR list is Yume Kitasei’s The Deep Sky.

Hope June is treating you well. Thanks for reading,

Neve



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Springtime News 🌱

Writing Update

Spring is slowly pulling in into Minnesota and all of our snow has melted (for good? for now? who can say.) Meanwhile, I’ve been working on a prequel to That Murder Feeling. It’s not meant to be a full length novel, more “cookie-sized.” When I sat down to outline it, I wasn’t sure where it might end up length-wise but the word count just crossed from novelette territory into novella (17,500 words or above). So novella it is, a bit more than cookie-sized. It’ll be about 90 pages when it’s finished.

Even with an outline, I tend to do a lot of revision and editing. What I used to do — to give myself some distance from the manuscript and enable me to look at it with fresh eyes — is to tweak the font between revisions. Times New Roman to Palatino to Garamond, that kind of thing. It never worked as well as the universally recommended approach, letting the manuscript sit for a month or longer without looking at it or even thinking about the story. But I’m not a fast writer and adding big pauses between drafts is SLOW.

Green background. Chapter One. The first and only time that I saw Millie Barnhill, she carried a book. I couldn’t tell you what she might have been like on other days or in other settings, but that day—just about a year ago, in spring of 1983—what I saw was a slender woman in her late eighties in a track suit and sneakers. She stood in the checkout line just ahead of me, the single book in hand. We were in the main branch of the public library, centrally located in my small town of Two Lakes, Minnesota. What caught my eye were the mushrooms. Six or seven of them surrounded Millie, knee-high and with lively aqua-blue caps the size of dinner plates.
The Mushrooms of Mischief.
The Green Draft

So with the novella, I’ve been trying this new thing where I change the background color in Microsoft Word’s Immersive Reader between drafts. I like the Immersive mode because you can choose column width and set it to be more like a published book. There’s also an option to change text spacing and have Word read the words back to you. And then there’s the page color.

The new approach, turns out, works well.

For one thing, having a specific, named color gives more of a sense of progress. Done with the Yellow Draft, next up: Green. And so on.

There’s also more of a delineation between drafts, encouraging forward progress. No sneaking back to polish previous chapters. Leave that for Blue.

And it’s just plain fun to choose the colors.

I’m limiting myself to four passes, which might be a lot for some authors, but not so much for me. I like to polish and tweak and move stuff around and debate whether Option A or Option B works better for a character or story line… So it’s good to have a framework. The planned sequence is: Yellow, Green, Blue, Orange, where the read-through gets faster and faster each time.

After that I’ll draw a line under the manuscript. Done. Whoosh. Off it goes to my editor. When it comes back, I’ll make any changes and then there’ll be a final read either on paper or my Kindle.

The prequel story take place about a year before the events in That Murder Feeling. No title yet… Stay tuned for more!

The novella will be part of the Soul Garden Mysteries. Just a reminder, as a subscriber to my author newsletter, you have access to bonus content for the series! Click through to the hidden page on my website.

What I’m Reading

If you’ve been following this newsletter for a while, you’ll know that what I write hovers on the border between SFF and the mystery genre, sometimes falling more one side or the other. The same can be said of the books that I read (with a few other genres thrown in.) The last couple of newsletters I’ve had mysteries to recommend. This month, it’s two science fiction novels.

Lost in Time by A.G. Riddle. This one has been on my to-be-read list for a while. Based on the cover, I was anticipating a sci-fi thriller but it’s more of a combo of a thriller and an intricate murder mystery, with plenty of twists and time-travel surprises.

The Stardust Grail by Yume Kitasei. An adventurous, imaginative space quest with plenty of likable and interesting characters. I’m about a third into the book and enjoying it very much.

Let me know if there are any novels you’ve enjoyed lately and want to recommend! (Leave a comment on Substack or reply to the newsletter email.)

Books, Lots of Books

March seems to be kind of a bookish month, in that there are spring sales and promotions everywhere you look. Here are a couple that include some of my books.

The first one—the graphic says it all—is geared toward time travel books.

The second is for cozy reads of all kinds — mystery, fantasy, romance. The link takes you to Kobo Plus but all of the books are available on other retailers too.

Hope you’re having a good March! Thanks for reading,

Neve